Stars: 2
Review by: LZ99
The story line
had promise, but the writing was very lacking (think elementary school
writing assignment), and the "loose ends" of the story lacked meaningful
resolution by the end. Further, the editing
errors (spelling, grammar, entire sentences with no space marks) could
be distracting--or could be a challenge, to see how many could be found
in one chapter!
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